Wake up, my sister!
I cry with love.
The night is over,
The sun's above.
I wish you'd wake
And get out of bed...

So awake, my sister,
Thine head.

To be sung to the tune of 'Goodnight, My Someone' from The Music Man at the earliest hour of morning possible ('morning air' *snerk*). Don't you think it such an improvement on the original? I sang it to Ruth this morning, but she seemed most ungrateful. Hmm. Perhaps if I revise it again, she'll be more appreciative?

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1. Anonymous on January 15, 2009 at 12:14 PM

   *I* like it. ;) I can't think why Ruth wouldn't. :)

    
2. Unknown on January 20, 2009 at 8:07 PM

   Hardy-har-har, I can't imagine why not either. Perhaps because you were singing in a very ear-splitting and out-of-tunish tone of voice?